100wc 11th July Jeremy

A new start. What is that? OH I know what it is. It’s someone starting again! Wait, no, it’s a start that’s new. OK. I know what a new start is. It is someone starting again. But who is starting what? Let’s start with who is starting again. Who should it be? A man called Mark? A woman called Ella? OH I know. A person called Bobby McJeffrey! Now what is Bobby starting? Oh I know. He can start a new school year just like me! He thinks he will love it but I’m not so sure. We’ll see. BYE!

2 thoughts on “100wc 11th July Jeremy”

  1. Love the idea of an internal monologue! Can imagine myself having the same conversation at the start of a writing piece- now I want to know what happens to Bobby! Great work!

  2. A really original way of approaching this topic; I enjoyed the stream-of-consciousness style. Great effort.

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